Frozen February
I walk across the concrete hard snow. My shoes make an odd "carvep" as they come to the cold ground, almost like the sound of cutting cardboard. As I trudge along, my shoe crashes through the ice. It cuts at my ankles. Well, I guess the snow isn't quite so solid as I thought. Dusk has washed everything in blue, so that even the characteristically white drifts are almost light cobalt. The world is silent. A faint hint of burning wood clings to my nose. I find myself infront of the swing in my backyard. I sit on its rough, wooden seat and clench my fingers around its bitter, metal chains. Wildly, I start to jerk back and forth. My eyes start to leak. I suppose February isn't quite so frozen as I thought.
I love this one about February! The vocabulary is amazing, you are so smart! It really puts a strong image in my head. I love the line, 'a faint hint of burning wood clings to my nose.'
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